start at the Drawing Board...

this is where it starts

fires suck
and so does smoke
ash is bad
it makes me choke
burning homes
causes much sadness
people think
"where's God in all this?"

Comments:

Edward, "sadness" and "God in all this" do not really rhyme. Therefore, ... ???

p.s. this is great poem, somber though it may be

# posted by

-Aaron- : 10/1/08 17:46

it's slant rhyme!! i swear!

sort of...

# posted by

Ed : 6/2/08 08:18

It's sort of a slant rhyme, or you sort of swear?

!
:)

# posted by

-Aaron- : 6/2/08 11:31

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