start at the Drawing Board...

this is where it starts

25 ottobre 2007

 
fires suck
and so does smoke
ash is bad
it makes me choke
burning homes
causes much sadness
people think
"where's God in all this?"

Comments:
Edward, "sadness" and "God in all this" do not really rhyme. Therefore, ... ???

p.s. this is great poem, somber though it may be
 
it's slant rhyme!! i swear!

sort of...
 
It's sort of a slant rhyme, or you sort of swear?


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